I thought
I was in love.
I felt the butterflies people always get.
My heart stops
when I talk to him.
I can't go a minute
without thinking about him.
And still, they tell me, I can't
know what love truly is.
But this time,
I just know
it's gotta be love.
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That was really good! I like how you describe the feelings. It's that same with every person when they're crushing :)
ReplyDeleteI love this poem :) good job!
ReplyDeleteThe poem gives a nice feeling, however I wish it did to things; gave imagery and went on further.
ReplyDeleteAlso, you might want to look at the line placement, since the random stop and start system can be a bit awkward.