Friday, July 24, 2009

My Wish

My wish is to live a life without sadness
My wish is to die without a sin in my heart
My wish is to live knowing that someone cares about me
My wish is to know what life has in stored for me
My wish is to live with a life full of joy
My wish is to have meaning in my life
My wish is to die with a smile on my face
My wish is to not see my parents die before my very eyes
My wish is to see a smile on everyone’s face before I die My wish is for someone to make my wish come true.

3 comments:

  1. i like this poem... the simplicity but obvious joy is really quite nice. i like how this is very relatable... and i hope that this all comes true for you :D

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  2. I agree with the simplicity of the poem is very nice, my only sugestion is that you work with the size and boldness, since it's a bit hard to read.

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  3. I completely agree..this is an amazing poem!!

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