Wednesday, July 22, 2009

Mirror, Mirror...Reflect my poem!

As the fire burned indefinitely,
Hell broke loose in the kitchen room.
Hate spewing from both their mouths,
Fighting again over something so trivial and unimportant.
They did this every night, disturbing my peace
Which is hard to find these days.
My peace, as fragile as the snow outside our window
Falling at a rate that would destroy it.

Falling from a rate that would destroy it,
My peace, as fragile as the snow outside our window
Which is hard to find these days.
They did this every night, disturbing my peace;
Fighting again over something so trivial and unimportant.
Hate spewing from both their mouths,
Hell broke loose in the kitchen room,
As the fire burned indefinitely.

2 comments:

  1. very creative title. wish i thought of it. lol. anyway the poem def works well and flows nicely

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  2. - Your Mirror Poem Came Out Better Than Mines.I can definetly Picture this really happening in my head.I like your title too I'm Jealous :[.

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