when everything explodes.
when your eyes well up,
and your throat closes.
that feeling....
where you want to whisper their name.
when you need a friend,
and a hug more than anything.
that feeling....
when you know they've won.
when you can feel your life slipping,
and it slides right out of your hands
that feeling...
when you know it went wrong.
when you feel like losing hope,
and you know it's all done.
that feeling.
- Maddie im in love w/ this poem hun :) / keepi doin' w/e your doing so i could catch up. lol.
ReplyDeleteI love the first stance, its short yet it says sooo much.& the last one because its kinda like the first one but its kinda like an after feeling . :D
Shennelll!!!!!!! i missss you! thank you sooo muchhh! thank you... yea, the first and last stanzas are definately my strongest... iloveeyou!
ReplyDeleteahh hey shennell!! lol yes maddie i like this 2...my real comment is on ur blog
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